Home brew musics

[XtrmJosh]

A few months ago I got into home brewing music using some effects generated in FL Studio. Would appreciate if you guys could check it out and give me some feedback, thinking of starting up again;

http://youtu.be/YjTIltT9-bs

http://youtu.be/3L9wIxhBA0Y

All feedback welcome. I'll possibly do more, depending on what you think :)

[HolmaN]

Second one was really "underground" :P

[Jah]

Oh my, my ears bleed! ;(
No, it's good but can get alot better.
Try mixing it up with more effects, it's never to much. DO SOMETHING CRAZY!

[XtrmJosh]

Gonna do some more with this at the weekend, but I might be going motorbike shopping tomorrow! I've also got a big tutorial video to make (will take 3h+ prolly including editing / uploading).

Anyone else got any comments?